Bethany

I think is gorgeous like this,I like how sharp and deep the eye in light is and how you can see the reflection on the other one too,same for the lips that are detailed and shiny while the rest of the photo has a blurred dreamy feel.I also like how you kept a little colour on the lips (you did right? ) while I'mnot sure about the pink on the eye for the simple reason that all you can see is one single stone but I think she has more,even if it's tiny the coulor is strong and take away attention from those gorgeous eyes,they're like pool she's beautiful.I really really like the blurred hair on the background.I'm also not 100% sure about the hand but it's just the pose,I like it there and it add to the composition,also you can't change that now,so I'd say...the only thing I'd change is the colour of the glitter but that is just a small thing,overall this is lovely and goes into my favs ...a bit long....well you asked for it